lumin-ant
((2004-08-29 - 12:12 a.m.))
lumin-ant
Appearance
It reminds me of the Super Mario Brothers games that were created for the original Nintendo game console. That's good! It's also simple and easy to read, which is great. Kudos to pink-design. This is the second of their templates I have reviewed and loved. Thank you for being fourteen and resisting the urge to get a template featuring Avril!
Content
Your write remarkably well. None of the entries I read were particularly interesting, thought-provoking, or otherwise noteworthy. A random sampling SHOULD be representative of your diary as a whole, and I think it was. You just didn't usually grab my attention, and when you did, I found it very disturbing. You have a few gems, such as this and this, but the only truly remarkable aspect of your diary is that you are capable of stringing words into coherent sentences at your age.
Impressions
If a diary is a collection of the pieces of you, then you have a very good one, regardless of my lack of interest. Entries, photographs, extras galore -- you've got it all. In ten years, you'll enjoy looking back at your own past and will be glad that you've kept such a thorough record of your life.
You are very smart. You know it. You also know that you lead something of a charmed life. You've had a comfortable, seemingly tolerant upbringing, you'll go to a good college, find love, and build a nice life for yourself. Congratulations on that.
Suggestions
I could tell you to stop worrying so much about boys, but that would be pointless. Instead, I will tell you to remove all references to your last name. You are young and just arrogant enough to think that no harm can come your way, and I certainly hope it doesn't. If your life is a puzzle, though, you are giving all the pieces to potential predators, virtually intact. You haven't really seen the ugliness that can and does exist in the world, and I hope you never have to, so please take a simple precaution and protect your identity.
reviewed by retailharlot
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